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It's a story ok
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is my first critique so be nice <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";P" title="Wink/Razz"/> dis is just so amazing. I love the character background and how deep you went into it. I'd say this is the best story EVAH. You need to write the 2nd chapter nao. LIKE RIGHT NAO. DO EET. DAT ASS IN MAH MIND THAT YOU DREW IN MAH MIND MAN AMAZIN

Also wtf was that otter doing with that giraffe like oh em gee doubleu tee eeff are they like BFF's or something cuz this is better than lion king with that warthog and little thing named timoan. Desu desu desu characters desu derp filler derp need more fillah desu